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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Fearless (Edited)

    Heya yuri :) Thanks for being, like, one of the only people who actually posted their entries for my contest. :lol: As promised, and requested, I'm here to review it. ...

    Jun 15, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Evil Within (prologue and chapter one)

    Heya :) Here to review as requested. You've had plenty of reviews on the prologue, so I'm going to review the first chapter for you. Once thing though, next time ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Welcome to Hell

    Heya jas. 8) Skins here to review as requested. Poetry isn't my strong point, but I'll try my best to give you a worthy review. Also, sorry if I repeat ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Shakin' Hands & the Art of Socialising

    Howdy Ben. :smt028 Here to review as requested. I'm going to warn you in advance, non-fiction is no way my strong point. In fact, I epically fail at reviewing it. ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Ringbearers - Chapter 2

    Heya again. I is back, my bruva. Sorry about that... British slang. :smt003 Anyway, you know the drill! Every line in her face was turned down in to a scowl. ...

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Ringbearers - Chapter 1, Part 2

    Heya Violet. Here to review. Are you excited? I hope you're not... that would be weird. :smt001 Lucky for me, no one seems to have nit-picked yet. I like nit-picking. ...

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Mythological Fantasy: C1: The creation {EDITED V1}

    Heya, here to review as requested. :D I'm really sorry that I'm late! I was on vacation for four days and then when I came back, my computer decided to ...

    Jun 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: I live with V.A.mpires

    Heya lady. :) Here to review as requested. I'm really sorry that I'm late! I was on holiday for four days and then my computer decided to only work when ...

    Jun 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Ringbearers - Prologue and Chapter 1, Part 1

    Heya Violet. :) Here to review as requested! Sorry I'm kind of late, I've just returned from my holiday. Hey. My name’s Dex Reemer. Not really. The reason I don’t ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: For the Love of God Chapter 2

    Heya :) Here to review as requested! Sorry I'm kind of late, I've just returned from my holiday. Because I didn’t have wings, we had to walk into the city. ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: an esquisse of the sun

    Heya Jagged :) Here to review as requested, 'cause I is cool. I'm not the best when it comes to reviewing poetry, but I'll try my best to do so. ...

    Jun 2, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Chasm (for Flyleaf contest)

    Heya irish :) Here to review, believe it or not. Lily has pointed out most things that I would have pointed out, I'll try my best to find something else ...

    Jun 1, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The French Revolution Song (parody of Hey Soul Sister)

    Like usual, this isn't a proper review... sorry. :smt003 I just wanted to drop by and say how much I liked this (again). I really do adore your parodies, hobbit. ...

    Jun 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: So, How Do You Feel About Rings? Golden Ones?

    Hey Kaedee. Sorry I'm a bit late, I've been busy lately. :lol: Anyways, you know the drill! And that is definitely , not it. You don't really need this comma ...

    Jun 1, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Cha-chew It (an Undo It by Carrie Underwood parody)

    Sorry, this isn't going to be a proper review... :smt003 haha! This is great! I love all of the song parodies that are going around YWS at the moment. This ...

    May 30, 2010


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