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Heya :) I'm here to review as requested. My internet has been really dodgy lately, so sorry I couldn't get this done for you sooner. My internet's fixed now though, ...

Heyaaa :) I'm here to review as requested. It looks like you've already gotten some really nice reviews, so I'm warning you in advance that this review might be a ...

Heya Shubhi :) I'm very sorry that I got to this a bit late... I seem to have gotten here very late because everyone else has given you some seriously ...

Heya Jem :D I'm here to review as requested! You've already gotten a really nice review from AM. I'll try not to mention what she's already mentioned unless I feel ...

Heya Yuri :) You know the drill! Drops of water clattering a gainst the timber window panes . Uncertainty blocking your puzzled downcast eyes You don't need a space here ...

Heya Flower :) I'm not going to give you a line by line critique in this review because I don't really think you need it. I'm also quite short for ...

Hey there, Jas :) I'm here to review the beginning of your story for you. You reviewed mine, so I had to return the favour. If you have any questions ...

Heya Lena :) I'm here to review, believe it or not. If you have any questions about my review after I've finished, just ask me through PM or something. I ...

Heyaaa :) I'm here to review as requested. You've already gotten some nice reviews so I'll try my best not to repeat what's already been said unless I think that ...

Heyaa :) I'm here to review as requested. I haven't actually read the previous chapters but I'm pretty good at getting the idea of things, so I think I'll understand ...

Yo. 8) I'm here to review, 'cause I am da shizz. Quite literally. My name is Shizz. I'm in a rather sarcastic mood, so sorry if I comment on something ...

Heyaa :) I'm here to review your prologue, believe it or not. ;) I'll start the review off with pointing out any nit-picks or grammatical errors that I find in ...

Heyaa :) I'm here to review! None of them understood the way his hands felt or the way his smile could light up the world, even brighter even then the ...

Heyaa Val :) I'm here to review as requested. I haven't read the previous chapters, simply because I'm limited for time right now so I want to give you your ...

Heyaa :D I'm here to review the next chapter of this! Like in my last review, I'll start this review off with any nit-picks that I have for you. I ...