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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Till Death Do Us Apart-(Prologue)

    Hey there, guys :) I'm here to review as requested! I apologise in advance if I repeat anything that's already been said... I'll try to be careful not to though, ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Her Molten Core - Chapter 1 (16+)

    Yo. Snoink. Your stuff always entertains me to the max, but I've never reviewed any of it. Go figure. Most of the time, I read your stuff weeks after it's ...

    Oct 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Flight Towards Freedom

    Heya :) Like you asked, I've popped in to say what I think of this now you've edited it. This sin't going to be a proper review or anything because ...

    Oct 4, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Humans,

    Heya :) I was stalking/looking at your portfolio and I came across this. I liked it so I thought, why not review it? I really love the idea behind it ...

    Oct 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Shapeshifter- Prologue

    Hey there, Pretty Crazy! I see that you haven't got loads of reviews yet, so hopefully, I'll be able to help you out on this. Can I just say in ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: "Your Story is About..."

    I told you I'd be here, didn't I? :twisted: He didn’t know how to go about changing his title in the minds of his Masters, so for a short while ...

    Sep 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Switch (2)

    I is BACK. A smile forced itself to her lips and she turned to face Corbin, who was leaning against the truck-cab, grinning like a cat . Uhh... okay. Never ...

    Sep 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Switch (1)

    PISHA. hi. He had always trusted her to make the right choices, but sometimes , he wondered if age affected her way of thinking. A voice that could tame a ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Road Not Taken(1)

    Hey there, Shubs. :) Yaaaaaaaay!!!!!!! I'm finally reviewing something of yours . You've reviewed so much of my stuff recently and I'm so happy to finally be able to return ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: I

    Heya :) I'm here to review as requested. I've never, in my life, reviewed anything like this before so this critique might be... interesting to say the least. I'll give ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [11]

    My last review! Dun. Dun. Duuuun. Skinsy has a feeling that the six year gap may have arrived... Luke is eighteen... he's just kissed Liliah... it's clearly freaked him out... ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [10]

    Guess who it is again? ;) I've decided that I'm going to review the rest of this now, considering there's only two chapters left. It's about time I make myself ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [9]

    Considering it's Reviewing Sunday and I've got nothing better to do, I may as well keep reviewing this. :) So yeah... onto the review! His scent scorched its way down ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [8]

    Yooooooooooo I'm here to review, believe it or not! ;) Before I get onto this review, I just remmebered something about the first chapter. Well, the prologue technically. It was ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [7]

    Heyooo :D I'm hoping thi review won't be as dodgy as the last one.. but you know me. I couldn't make sense if I tried. Anyway, onto the review! I ...

    Sep 25, 2010


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