Sins

Heya, Someone :) I'm here to review your piece as requested. Like you asked, I'm going to fix all grammatical errors that I find. So yeah... I'll start your review ...

Yo, Tiger! Sup, my sister? 8) I apologise for taking ages to get to this... Busy, buys, busy! I've kind of missed out because you've already been attacked with epic ...

Heya! I'm here to review as requested. Sorry I've taken my time... I've been rather busy lately with review requests and junk. Plus I have some stupid maths exam coming ...

Your mother is a child stealer! I repeat, your mother is a child stealer! Anyway, hey Jashy girl! :D I apologise for getting to this late... I've just been so ...

Hey Rach. :) I'm finally here! Sorry it's taken me a while to actually get to reviewing this. I suck when it comes to doing things on time, I really ...

Heya, Flower :) I'm going to warn you in advance that this review may be short and a little pointless too... As you know, poetry isn't my strong point when ...

Heya Spike! :) I'm here to review as requested. You already have some lovely reviews, so I'll try not to be repetitive and simply repeat what they've already said. If ...

Heya, Nike :) I'm not going to include any nit-picks because, to be honest, I didn't find many errors. I noticed that your dialogue punctuation wasn't too perfect, but it ...

Yo. Pear. *Nods* It was actually creepy that you requested a review from me on this because I was actually going to read and review it anyway... You psychic dwarf! ...

Obviously, I can't review this... not properly anyway! I'll begin by saying that this is really epic, Jashy! Another thing you're clearly talented at is creating videos, along with the ...

Hey there, ashley :) It's reviewing day, so I'm trying to do plenty of reviews, and I'm here to review your work for you. Before I go any further, I'd ...

Heya :) I thought I'd drop by and review this for you because this is a very debatable piece, and I like debatable pieces. You'll get a lot of people ...

I'm here for my last review! :) I'm hoping that this one might be a bit more detailed and specific. As well as a review for the fourth chapter, this ...

I'll cut the chit-chat and get straight onto it! ;) My critique for this chapter is basically what I've said in my other reviews. Make sure you show, not tell, ...

Hey again :) I'm probably going to have less to say this time because my critiques for this chapter are similar to my critiques on your last chapter. I'll try ...