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Heya aestar :) I'm here to review as requested. Like you asked, I'll point out any nit-picks that I have for you. Please remember to take my critique with a ...

Hey Rain. :) I'm here to review as requested! As you already know, poems aren't my strong point when it comes to critiques. I'm not going to get all nit-picky ...

I'm here at last! :D Is it all right if I don't get all nit-picky? It's just that when I'm not nit-picky, I seem to be able to concentrate on ...

Hey, point. :) I'll be honest and say that I'm not sure how much help I'm going to be here because poems aren't my strong point when it comes to ...

I'm finally here to review this, Coral! Okay! You told me that these first three parts are actually all one chapter, right? I'm glad to have heard that because I ...

Heya, Silented. :) You've already gotten some lovely reviews here, so I might end up struggling a little. Plus, I think that this is actually very good, so I might ...

Hey, Flower! :) I'm not sure if I'm going to be much help here, if I'm honest. You've already gotten reviews that have pointed out things that I also noticed... ...

Heya, Eli. :) I always like reviewing contest entries... It makes me feel more pumped up. Weird, I know. Hey, I'm a creeper. I had a look at the contest, ...

Why hello there... :twisted: Like I said, I'm here to review this second chapter. It will probably be my last review of the day because I should really be in ...

Heya aweqs. :) You've already gotten some good reviews here, so I'm not sure if I'll have much more to add. Because of that, this review could be a little ...

Me again! :twisted: Okay... I know you told me to pick either your poem or this, but I can't resist... I seriously loved your poem, and it would eternally haunt ...

Yo! 8) I actually looked at this poem half an hour or so before you asked me to review it... Creepy. Anyway, yeah! Here I am to review it! Is ...

Heya idraax. :) I think that this review may be a little short... sorry... The piece itself is a little short and I don't really have much to critique you ...

Haha, that's so cool! :) You're so sweet... xD I can't believe I've only now spotted this, especially considering this is on the featured works! I have no idea why ...

Heya! :) I'm here to review, believe it or not. I'm in a nit-picky mood, so I'm going to be cool and nit-pick this for you. Hopefully, I won't be ...