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Why, hello there. Okay, so overall, I thought this was pretty good. You had some really good imagery in this short story and you managed to portray the MC's emotions ...

Yourface. Yourturtleface. I'm kind of disappointed that you wrote this because I was getting excited at the idea of Ranger setting me free to attack you. Ah well, another time, ...

Yo. Sup. *nods* Because of your lack of posting (shame on you ;)), I may be a little rusty when I review this. I've had to remind myself of who ...

Hidere. I know you well enough to know that you don't like nit-picks, so I won't bother doing any. ;) I NO U. Sorry, I'm in a funny mood because ...

Me again. :P This review's going to be even more suckish than the last one... xD The chapter itself is pretty short, so I can't guarantee that I'll be able ...

It's meeeeeeeeeee! Hai. Okay, so I'm pretty sure you've edited this quite a bit since a lot of the reviews. I think you've done a really great job too! I ...

Yo! 8) I'm not going to do nit-picks or anything because they're not really my thing. Is that alright? If you do want nit-picks or anything, just let me know! ...

Yooooo! Okay, well, cC has given you such an awesome review... well, reviews really. :P It'll certainly be interesting to see if I have anything to add, hehe. This for ...

Hidere. This will probably be more of a passing comment than a review because I always suck at reviewing edited things. This will probably just be full of compliments anyway... ...

I'm aliveeeee! I'm awfully sorry this has taken me ages to get to, especially after saying I could do it... Monday, was it? So yeah, sorry! I'm not sure how ...

So many epic reviews... x3 Okay, so! Per request, here I am. This isn't the kind of piece I'm all too awesome at reviewing, but I'll try my best to ...

I'm finally here! :D Sorry it's taken me a while to get to this. First week back in school. Busy, busy, eh? Hopefully, this review will be worth the wait ...

Before I begin, can I say something? It's important, so I'll highlight it in an electric blue. Stop. Slating. Your. Writing. xD Seriously! In every author's note of every chapter, ...

I'm baaaaack. x3 I hate always coming here last because I always end up repeating what's already been said. I'm a little rushed for time right now, but don't worry, ...

YoYoYoYoYoYoYoYo!!! You don't seem to have any solid critiques yet, so maybe (although highly unlikely), I'll be able to find something for you to work on. If not, I'll just ...