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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Sometimes, chapter Seventeen

    Okay, so I know I'm about 7384 years late, but better late than never, eh? The lack of quality this review will be probably won't help though... See, I've been ...

    Sep 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Eyes.

    *Was going to enter this contest, but then I realised I wasn't American, so my entry didn't count. Stoopid Figment rules. You better win that iPad, Jas. Win it for ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Neon Lamps

    ihazreturned. :twisted: People say they dislike the arched ceilings and the shadowy payment s exchanges between quick hands, yet they’ve all been involved at least once. You don't need that' ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Walk To Remember

    Yo. It's me. You didn't think I'd come, did you? Diiiid eeeeewww?!?!?! I did. In case you haven't noticed that yet. I'll shut up now. Well, not really; I need ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (2.1)

    I tried something different this time, but I think it came out very similarly to the previous chapters (in a bad way). A certain metaphor is KILLING me right now ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (2)

    Before I get on to the actual review, I'm going to have a bit of a rambled rant. I do apologise for that, but it's for your own good though, ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1.1)

    of course he has the right to be depressed, what with an abusive boyfriend and no penis? I LOL'd so badly at this. I love you, Jas. I truly do. ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Sometimes, chapter Sixteen

    Haha! How did I know that Cassie would react like that when she found out about H arm wrestling Sonny? I guess I just know her so well. Thanks to ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Sometimes, chapter Fifteen

    I've actually made time to review!!! Review day must motivate me/convince me that homework and school isn't important. I like. Not that I'll be any use anyway... As always, I ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Sometimes, chapter Fourteen

    Yoooooo! 8) Here comes me and the most useless review in the history of useless reviews! H'okay, so believe it or not, I loved this chapter. Every single chapter, your ...

    Aug 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Sometimes, chapter Thirteen

    GOO! Guess who?! No, it's not John Lennon. No kiddin! :) I wish I had a beard like that x Awww, he put a kiss on the end. ;D Anyways! ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The playground is burning

    Here she’ll take a deep breath, look ed at her monitor again before turning down the speed... How dare you make a mistake like this. HOW DARE YOU. *Finishes story, ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: I can't keep you Secret.

    Heya! As requested, I'm here to review this for you. :) I'm a little pressed for time, so I apologise in advance if this review is a bit messy. Once ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Of Angels

    IMISSYOU. In reality, this won't be a review because you're too good for, err, your own good, but I just need to comment on this. I have to. It's you. ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)

    A male MC? Depressing subjects? Self harm? Naked guy? OH, HELLO. Okay, so I love your opening line here. The opening line of a novel is so insanely important, and ...

    Jul 31, 2011


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