Sins

On message takes me completely by surprise because it’s not from my parents. I didn’t imagine anyone outside of my immediate family would notice or care that I left, but ...

Look at me being the first reviewer for once, oioi. This is another new section you've thrown into the story, right? Or at least a different version of one, as ...

Look at me, being only slightly late since my last review for once. On the third day, there is Zac. *insert moonface emoji* So! From what I remember of this ...

Why, hello there. I'm in peak procrastination mode right now, and as it's review day, I figured why not pretend I don't have an unspeakable amount of uni work to ...

Me again! :P As this is a bit of an uneventful extract, I imagine this will be a bit of a short review, but hopefully not a useless one (but ...

Sorry for lagging a bit with this, I'm sort of bombarded with uni work at the moment, y'know, all that fun stuff. So! As with the first half of the ...

Why, hello there. So as a pre-warning thingy, obviously as I've read the last draft of this here novel, I may end up repeating some stuff I noted in those ...

On the bright side, I'm finally here to review this! On the not so bright side, I'm uncertain I'll have anything very constructive to say (per usual, really) :P Sincere ...

Ok ok, admittedly, not quite before the new year.. but hey, 2 days late isn't too awful :P Partly because this is my first review in, like, forever because I'm ...

Hello! I noticed that this chapter of yours was in the green room, so figured I'd come review it for you :) So, this has a lot of potential. I'm ...

Finally, here I am :P This is a really neat chapter overall, and something a little different, so I doubt I'll be of much use. It was super interesting getting ...

Your description of this really intrigued me, so here I am :P So. I love the concept of this. The idea of someone befriending (even if it is fake) death ...

Hihi! More character background info, yay :P In all seriousness, I think you timed this reveal of Paula's background well. While I admittedly would've liked to have known mroe about ...

Why, hello there :P I noticed this int he green room, then realised it was something of yours, and was just like omg, I'm so reviewing this . So... voila! ...

Hey! I noticed that this has been in the green room for a little while now, so I figured I'd come review it for you to get it out of ...