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Righteo, as you're just a generally epic person who writes bucket loads of epic reviews whose also reviewed one of my pieces epically, I shall try and return the favour! ...

I hath returned! Like in my prologue review, I'm not going to bother you with nit-picks and instead, get straight into my overall opinion. I'll not what I think is ...

Hey there, SushiSashimi, I noticed you linked this piece in Team Fire Flower's forum, and so I've come to check it out and review it for you as a fellow ...

Hey Tortwag, I noticed your prologue lurking in the Green Room and as it's Review Day, I figured I come and check it out. I won't get into nit-picks because ...

Heya Erza, it's around 1:30am, it's review day, and I am pumped! As a result, I thought I'd come check out the essay you have here and drop by to ...

Hey there, tiggpanda, I'm here to review the monologue you have here! I won't go into detailed nit-picks because I feel that an overall critique with focus on the more ...

Hey there singingwriter, and welcome to YWS. :D It's currently review day and this is my second review, so I shall get straight in! I'm going to begin this review ...

Hey there, I came across this chapter of yours while searching the Green Room and thought I'd come check it out and review it for you. I'll start with minor ...

Hey there, I was browsing the Green Room when I came across this and it had an interesting premise, so I thought I'd come check it out. :) I always ...

Hey there, Wherethewindgoes, I'm here to review as requested! :) I'll start off with smaller nit-picks, and then give you my overall opinion with critiques and what not. The last ...

Heya, HaleyPenguin, I thought I'd come and review this piece for you :) I want to go back to the times where there wasn't man-eating zombies. Weren't instead of wasn't ...

Hey there, Smilykid, I'm here to review your piece (as I'm sure you probably figured). His face was hard like marble and chiseled like the rugged features of a rock ...

Sandvich, my home dawg “What are we doing in here, man?” He asked.The first man looked at him. You don't need to capitalise he and you've forgotten to add space ...

Sandvich. *Nods a hello* Seth. *Nods another hello* He always made sure to keep his avenues of escape clear, so that he could flee at the first sign of trouble. ...

It was as if she could sense what was happening. It was as if seems a bit redundant here. I mean, she did want to know what was happening, it ...