SinisterPotatoe

Thank you for your review. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Thank you very much for your review, I feel like I can really learn from what you have pointed out.

thank you for your review, I appreciate it. And I'm happy you liked it :D

I love it. For a first poem this is amazing. So much is left to the imagination yet much has been said. You got that in between poem that was ...

thank you!

thank you for the review, sorry if it's a little confusing, it's less confusing if you read parts 1 and 2, but I understand that maybe I put to much ...

Thank you for the review! I'll release more work sometime soon, so feel free to check then out when I have enough points to post them. I'll check out your ...

This is about people being afraid to show their true selves to others, and instead hide behind a fake persona. It is about the class clown who just wants to ...

I helped split up the paragraphs and rewrote some of parts 1 and and 2. I just came out with part three. It might be too much to ask, but ...

I have edited and rewritten parts of this chapter to make them better and fix the mistakes I made when I first published this. If you read it once before ...

I have edited and rewritten parts of this chapter to make them better and fix the mistakes I made when I first published this. If you read it once before ...

There is a plot, after Melina falls ill after the fight against the blackhoods for an unknown reason, the town doctor says that there is only one way that he ...

Everyone, part 2 is out now, just search for The Life Of Kronus, Part 2, Primal's Wrath. Here is the link

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I like this poem very much. It is obvious to me that you have talent, but being new to writing and this site I have no idea what it is ...