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Re: Shadow of the Sun, Ch. 1
Awesome! Very descriptive and suspenseful! I love it! I like the way mikhails mind works as well :D . Not a lot of mistakes, so kudos for that! The snake ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: An Angel's decent
Mmm... Lovely! Nice length and good use of words. The only problem would be you forgot to capitalize the W in whom but that's very miner. All in all a ...
Jun 8, 2008