SimonF

I like how you had a lot of good historical elements in your story and how they were interesting and very accurate. I have some wonders because I was confused ...

l liked how all your historical facts were correct and also how you showed not telled. Your story was very fun to read and i was entertained and intrigued to ...

Nice story! I like how you showed us and didn't tell us. I like that you had so much detail that I could actually feel his emotions and understand what ...