Young Writers Society

This was a pretty good introduction to the story that occurs in a series. It seems as though the main character is a somewhat bratty and arrogant kid which I ...

This was a very interesting read. I commend you for introducing a story about a girl who was frantically trying to get to school. You made it obvious from the ...

This is an interesting beginning. So far the writing is engaging and introduces the characters well. It would be helpful if you could include some foreshadowing up until later on ...