Young Writers Society

I enjoyed reading this poem that you wrote, and I think that it told a story with very little text. From what I can tell if might be a poem ...

I enjoyed the story. I found it to be well written, but also has good dialogue between Jo and Oscar. I noticed a few grammatical errors with past tense, but ...

I believe that this is an interesting change from how stories are usually written. To me, the genre seems like either a romance or an erotic thriller. I would like ...

The characters were clearly described, and they were introduced well into the story. I enjoyed the descriptive language you used, and I thought it made the story easier to follow. ...

This was a pretty good introduction to the story that occurs in a series. It seems as though the main character is a somewhat bratty and arrogant kid which I ...

This was a very interesting read. I commend you for introducing a story about a girl who was frantically trying to get to school. You made it obvious from the ...

This is an interesting beginning. So far the writing is engaging and introduces the characters well. It would be helpful if you could include some foreshadowing up until later on ...