Silverdragon150

Awwwwwww! I'm sorry I haven't been around much Dawneh! I've missed you a lot too... I've learned a lot over this school year, and I've been really busy. But now ...

I have to say, this is a nice, simple poem. I especially like how you use figurative language to make the trees seem like living beings. I believe that you ...

Thanks! I updated it, fixing things you suggested. Tell me: does it read better now? I'll post the next chapter soon!

I have to say, Drama, I'm usually not much of a romance person, but I saw this was by you and had to read it. I love it so far, ...

Thanks for the input. I really think the rest of the story is a lot better than the prologue. This is actually my second shot at the prologue, and think ...

I love the image the reader gets in the first few lines. I also enjoy how you talk about the beach and you description with the birds. I like it ...

I can relate to this. I enjoy how you capture the feeling of the dream and the wonder that's connected to it. I especially applaud your word choice. It gives ...