SilverWolf

I really like the first chapter! It is really interesting and it sets up the world or at least the immediate society that the story takes place in. I like ...

I think this is really intriguing and well written. It makes you want to read more, which is essentially the whole point of the prologue, unless its setting up the ...

I think this is a really good prologue, it definitely hints at more to come. When she is thinking about the souls on her conscience you could have her think: ...