SilverArrow

Hey, SilverArrow here, pumped up and excited to review yet another brilliant chapter! Let's get right to it then, shall we? First, the nitpicks. As always, there are very few ...

Before I get to the review, I have to say that this was incredibly well written. Not to mention suspenseful to the max! I was practically on the edge of ...

To start this review off, I want to say that this was an interesting and well-written chapter. The "mystery voice" was a unique character, and he kind of left me ...

Overall, this was a really great start to an interesting story. The main character, Christina, was realistic and acted the way a normal teenager would if placed in the same ...

Poor Carey. To be already self-conscious about your weight and then have to work at a fashion company filled with beautiful people must be awful. The way you describe Carey's ...

Not that I've ever starved myself, but this was very realistic. The way Carey feels and thinks really seems like the same thought process an actual person going through this ...

Jumping right into the review, I'm going to say that this is an interesting story with a lot of potential. It's unique, and I can't say I've read anything like ...

First off, I'd like to say that this was well written. Your vivid use of description brought the characters and the story to life. I like how you chose to ...

One word: Fan-freaking-tastic! For starters, the chapter was incredibly well-written. Your use of description is brilliant and really makes the reader feel as if they were standing right in the ...

Wow. Where do I begin? First off, let me just say that this was amazing. The plot is unique and interesting, capturing the reader's attention right from the get-go. The ...

Really good! I liked how realistically you portrayed the character's emotion; it was obvious how nervous she was when pulling out the gun and how desperate she was to obtain ...