Silver

I like it. Like Sassykat said, short and simple. I do think you should add more; it doesn't feel quite complete. I would change the third line of the first ...

Hey! I really like the way your poem flows. I really didn't know that chemo affects your personality. I think you should expand on this; go into more details, make ...

Hi, I think you did a really good job on this poem. I love how it's so short yet powerful and relatable. Really, the only thing I can think of ...

Very nice poem! Sometimes shorter poems can be much more powerful, as yours is. I have some nitpicks for you :P Tranquil moments, passed on the seashore w atching as ...

I've never critiqued poetry before; you're my first try! xD Here it goes: I really like what you are trying to say with your poem. You do say it nicely ...

Hey, I'm Silver. Okay, so I think you have a good plot here. It could be expanded upon, and some parts didn't quite make sense, but a pretty good plot. ...