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So you know, the piece following this one's events is up as of today. It's called Contrition, and I hope you'll take a minute to check it out!

Thanks for your review! I am very glad you caught on with Simon- he, as a matter of fact, isn't all that interested in the information. It was more due ...

Of course. Happy to help :-) If you have a minute, maybe check out my work? I'll look at some more of yours

Hello! Thank you for reviewing my piece! See, in a lot of my more recent works I've purposefully left the setting more vague. I know in one-offs like this, it ...

As I said in the description, it is related to the story from which that quote is from. Which means anyone who does not know the significance of the trees ...

As I said in the description, it is related to the story from which that quote is from. Which means anyone who does not know the significance of the trees ...

And I am purposefully avoiding the F-bomb, which did not appear here. :-) Though, this IS good to know down the line.

Also, one or two curses isn't enough for this to be considered 18 . Now, if I was cussing every other line... that would be a different story, in my ...

A lot is two words. Using it as one is informal and incorrect. I also did not have much time to edit, and the friend who was going to go ...

I want to read this later, but it caught me because that character name is one letter away from my actual name! :D Mine starts with a C ("Cadence") like ...

I will say I've purposely left the time period the story takes place in completely ambiguous. It's SUPPOSED to make the reader think. I've already dropped plenty of hints about ...

I'd love to hear your thoughts on chapter two I will warn you- It has shitty pacing in plenty of places. Im doing a mass edit this weekend. ^.^

As for the mention of the vision, that's just what Rebecca assumed at first, as incorrect as she was.

Hello! First I'd like to apologize for the lack of speaker tags. We recently did a dialogue exercise in my creative writing class and the goal was to include as ...

Chapter two is up!