SilloriaD

Wow. I just. Wow. Let me take a moment to get myself together before I continue... ... Alright. Well, to begin, I will make my usual nit-picky comment about how ...

Hello there! Before I get into my critiquing, I would like to take a moment to say that, if you are in this mental state, I am sorry that it ...

Hello there! So, before I get into my critiquing- which I'm really bad at- I just want to say how much I love this poem as a reader. It's just.. ...

Hello! Okay, so what am I reading? I feel a definite lack of feeling and emotion attached to these lyrics. I really liked the fourth verse in every line except... ...

Hi there! Alright, so this made me pretty emotional. I love that chorus. I really wish this was already set to music because I want to hear it. I will ...