Sillia

Hi there :) Over all i loved the story. it had wonderful description and was amazingly written. I really like all the italics, it makes the story more appealing. One ...

This is a very well written chapter. Although there are a few things that could use some work, if i am to be completely honest. 1) if this is the ...

This is a really very good poem, one of the best that i have read yet, and believe me, i've read alot of them. Only thing is i think you ...

That is really REALLY well written. Like i loved it. Only thing i could say is instead of weird foods try exotic. That is honestly the only negative thing i ...

In all honesty, i didn't read the other ones because i didn't see the 7.2 so i thought this was the first part but i hope you don't mind me ...

Its pretty good fro your first piece. What i have to say though, is add some description, some spice to make it a liitle more interesting. The rain fell heavily ...

"She loved to delve into the black and white world of the written word. You could hardly ever find her without her nose buried in a book, and therefore, lost ...