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Re: To Infinity and Beyond
Thanks for the review. It was mentioned in another comment about the clauses (she) overuse and basically I explained it was mostly due to me not being bothered to use ...
Nov 27, 2015 -
Re: Flower Petals
Thanks for the review and glad you enjoyed it. My name is a referrence to Norse mythology as Sigyn was the wife of Loki who held a bowl over Loki's ...
Nov 27, 2015 -
Re: Flower Petals
Thanks for the review and gramma fix. :) The poem is up to you on how you see it some see it as being in love with two people or ...
Nov 27, 2015 -
Re: Guilt
Thanks for the review alternative universe me. I would go back and add more into the poem about the sort of crime however I don't think I can get myself ...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: To Infinity and Beyond
Thanks for the review. The point in time I wrote this was for homework at school. We were given a task on what was discovered beyond the gate so I ...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Guilt
Thanks for the review. The suggestion you just made was literally how this poem was before but I changed it as a comment suggested it might sound better and I ...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Guilt
Thanks for the tips and review. I just worked out what the star meant so thanks for the congrats. I took into consideration your nit-pick and it does flow better ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: Guilt
Thanks for the tips and review. I just worked out what the star meant so thanks for the congrats. I took into consideration your nit-pick and it does flow better ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: Flower Petals
Thank you so much for the review. Feel free to speculate over the line, "But not enough." I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: To Infinity and Beyond
Hi thanks for all the suggestions I will be sure to take them into consideration for my next writing piece. I mostly didn't go into the girls background as it ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: Flower Petals
Mostly I chose the title because of how it was meant to be read aloud as if you were picking flower petals going "he loves me, he loves me not." ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: To Infinity and Beyond
It's okay I found it myself, I will be sure to leave review once I've read it.
Nov 22, 2015 -
Re: To Infinity and Beyond
I do not know how you were bothered, but thank you so much and let me know if there is something I can do for you besides giving you points ...
Nov 22, 2015 -
Re: Flower Petals
Thanks for the review again and I will think about changing it normal, it might be less confusing that way. Besides that thanks for everything. Have a great day/night.
Nov 22, 2015 -
Re: To Infinity and Beyond
Sorry about the mistakes, didn't even realise as I was typing from my written work onto the area. If you can you tell me any mistakes I have missed and ...
Nov 22, 2015
