Sidorak12814

I take it you're an International Student? ;) Anyway, I have always greatly appreciated a poem that can make a sharp point about the vanities of life. The ironic correlation ...

A well-done introduction! You introduce the characters with minimal exposition about them, which can be risky, but in this case it works. The things the characters are doing initially and ...

The first thing that strikes me about this is its similarity to a certain illustration of Jesus', but that's not really a surprise, I'm sure. And it's not a problem, ...