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Oh, haah. Whoops. I fail when it comes to interpretation--sorry! Nice work!

My first thoughts upon reading these reviews from the two of you: O.O AIIIEEEEEEEEEEE! -Dances around the room in pure ecstacy, doing what she does best--shrieking- I think I must ...

Thank you, Ari! -Beams- I'm looking forward to your comments.

Hey, thanks you two! TBR - Yeah... this was kind of a far out plot (if there was any plot to it at all), so I can appreciate the "odd" ...

Yeah, sorry. My comment was kind of all over the place--and your reasoning makes sense. That's what I get for attempting to review a story at 2 am! Still, I ...

This was exquisitely written. I just wish I could have left the story feeling a little less confused that I did when beginning it. I guess I'm just not used ...

Haha, loved it. Especially "...This poem’s really boring." It's great when writers put down their work within the work... or, at least I find it humorous. Anyhow, nice job. You ...

Yay! You're welcome.

You're welcome! And yeah, you have good reasoning to overrule my critiques. Although I think it would make for a better story if Frank was smashed--he'd be more animalistic, uncontrollable, ...

Haah, you're welcome! I can see his (and your) take on the "list" paragraphs. I suppose I just like reading about people who are like me: emotionally attatched to anything ...

Hm. This would have been hilarious if I weren't such a stiff. I smiled at the lice line, though.

I'm usually not one for knocking a person's critique of my critique... So I won't. :D Uhm. But what I said still stands. I guess it's just a matter of ...

Hey, thanks TBR. Glad you liked it...!

Just out of curiousity, what was the meaning behind this title?

Oooh, I liked this. It was very well written--you have a knack for descriptions. My one question is, is this all there is to it? If so, you need to ...