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Wow. It's amazing to hear everyone's accounts of what they thought about the attacks. Although I do agree that Jack has a point saying that more sympathy was shown to ...

-Agrees with Sam- The descriptions of clothing seemed more like something a poser would wear as opposed to a skater. Maybe the style varies depending on which section of the ...

I agree with Reichieru in the sense that it seemed like two seperate peices. The introduction seemed a little generic: the speaker, standing in front of the bathroom mirror, watches ...

Oooh. This is incredibly clever. Your descriptive wording gives a really empty, sterile, 'hospital feel'--it really helps mold the overall effect of the poem. For example, this line: "but the ...

Ahahahah, oh man. That last line definately caught me off guard. I read the entire thing twice through, just to get the full effect of knowing what you were talking ...

Oooh, I really liked this. At first, I wasn't a big fan of the way your story skipped from place to place, totally unordered. But the more I got into ...

Oh wow. I really like this--I can relate to it so well. I was very shocked when these lines: "Evil Demonic Lustful..." surfaced. Because I'd expected something pleasant--you're giving them ...

-Grins.- Oooh, this is a wonderful concept. I love the opening paragraph--it definately makes me want to run around like a madwoman the next time a rainstorm comes through here. ...

Good gosh. This brought a tear to my eye. I'm not the overly emotional type, but there was just something about this piece. Your descriptions were phenomenal--they really brought out ...

Hmm. Just out of curiousity, how did your parents find out about this kiss in the first place? You were at school when this happened, right? I would agree with ...

Oooh, I loved this. It was adorable on the surface, and with a hint of deeper meaning. Although the character of Emily seemed a tad unrealistic (in the sense of ...

Mmm, I love it. To be brutally honest, I can't stand either of the main characters--J.T. for his disrespect and Madeline for her shallowness--but the story is well written enough ...

Wow. The first thing I'd like to say is that I'm stunned this song hasn't gotten any reviews! That's a shame, seeing as I think this song is brilliant (lyrically, ...

This poem definately made me smile a lot. Thank you for focusing on some of the sweetest parts of life--a lot of things written now are so dark. Not that ...

Excellent. I loved this poem. The dark, descriptive imagery you used was very effective--I could almost feel a plant snaking around my neck as I read it. The alteration (I'm ...