Shootingmoons

Oh my goodness thank you so much! It is so nice to see heart-warming comments like this, it really boosts my confidence :) .

Thank you so much! Yeah, flow is a problem I have with my writing. I guess just need to write more to get better at it :)

This is awesome poetry I could never do this. My mind is too... blah, to connect words together. Poetry is super awesome because it could honestly be about anything. It ...

Thanks so much for the review! Now that you mention it, the "St. Louis" thing is a major plot hole, haha. I guess I was aiming towards more like... that ...

Hello! Thank you for the awesome advise! I noticed I was a bit choppy on the commas, and I'll try to be less repetitive of them. I also noticed once ...

Hi! Thank you for the awesome feedback, I'll try to use it more in the future. I don't really know where the name "Putri" came from though, haha. I wrote ...

Thank you so much for the feedback! I will definitely keep this in handy for the future. I love the idea of starting off with an instant action. I was ...

Of course! And I was definitely going to scrap this prologue after a while. I just wanted to see the feedback and wonderful advice I receive.

Thank you for the advice, I will DEFINITELY keep this in handy. You did not come out harsh at all, I am mature enough to take advice. I honestly smiled ...

So sorry if this is sucky. This is my first time writing in forever, because I haven't had time to do it with studying. Feel free to critique any way ...

This was very detailed short story! I always enjoy a nice read while lying in my warm bed. The imagery made my heart stop, for example: "Holding the slice of ...

Haha!