ShonenChicoBoy

This was pretty good, even though I hate Taylor Swift. Anyway. I've always been everyone's girlfriend and no one's friend. I think maybe you meant for that to be the ...

This was really good. Wow. I have nothing to review on so I'm just going to point out that you don't just die from a lack of oxygen if you ...

Well, let me just say that the change was not what I was expecting. This was a lot different, but that's a good thing. Definitely not what I was expecting! ...

This looks like it is an interesting story. Is their journey to the desert land to assassinate the prince part of the main plot? That would be cool. I like ...

I thought that was going to be really long, but it turned out to be just mostly dialogue, so that was good. One thing that I didn't like was, as ...

Wow, I don't know if this is a mistake or not, but this is really short. That's kind of inconvenient. I mean, I came here hoping to do a review ...

Whoah, I really liked this. It's gritty and original. I like how you chose not to capitilize at the start of the lines... I think it makes things read faster ...

My first review! Whoah there... try and break up the text! It's really confusing and hard to read through... you need to space things apart. I thought that your idea ...