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Re: The insanity of Hathland.
Nice story. I can see that most of the mistakes and etc have been pointed out to you. Keep writing! :D
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: Liberation
A pair of unusual strange caring parents right? Rose = his mom. Marcus = his dad. All will be explained in time. . . : )
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: fight!!!
Naruto! Of course, the mistakes have been already pointed out, so this will be short. Correct it! Keep up the writing! :D
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
Thank you BigBadBear! Now that I've made that changes to the poem, it somewhat seems to flow better than before, possibly because it's without the f word. Much smoother poem ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1-The Queen
I liked it! I can't tell you any other mistakes, rather than the ones the others told you. Keep up the good work - please! :D
Jun 3, 2008