ShelraofWaral

I must say its a totally gripping, touching, heartfelt story. I enjoyed each and every line. But, the only bug I could find was the repetition of certain actions. Of ...

It is a very good piece of writing. But, it leaves open questions regarding the quest of the main character. I couldn't find any faults in grammar and spelling, You ...

Great Job! The story was very much engrossing. I think to make it more effective, you should vividly describe the feelings of your characters as well as the background in ...

Its a very absorbing piece of writing. The starting was a bit confusing, It looked like the girl was standing near the lake mourning for the loss of his love. ...

I always wondered and tried to imagined what will be the sceanrio of an aftermath of a deadly Nueclear War. Unlike the war-type stories I have read so far, this ...

Hello everyone this is a story that I made in the sixth grade and tried revising it this is an excerpt of the un-revised version and after a couple a ...