Shearwater

8D Yay, it's featured! And yes, I totally get what you mean, Shubhi, of course, I will address all your questions in the next chapter with Liliah's POV. Also, your ...

Hiya, Thanks for the reviews guys! I went back and edited the things you mentioned. Imaginemymind: Thanks for reading! I'm glad to have another supporter. :3 *rubs hands together* Hunter ...

Whisperer, Shubhi, Tanya and Carlito, thanks a bunch for the reviews! I went back and edited the things you mentioned. By the way, Liliah was feeling guilty for having such ...

Thank you, Shubs! I went and edited the things you mentioned, except that ozone part. I know what you mean and I'm going to check up on that later >.< ...

Thanks guys! I totally didn't catch that I referred to the clouds over and over again until you mentioned it, Ofir. Thank you for pointing that out. I'll be sure ...

Thanks Shubhi for an excellent review :) Yes, I know Liliah is off character. I made her purposely this way. She's not herself when she's with him, she's got her ...

Thanks Shubhi and Zanakoku for the reviews! You both caught a lot of things that I otherwise would have missed. I'm glad you like it, I do have a few ...

Thank you for the review Tanya. I'll fix the things that you mentioned. Okay, what you said is exactly what I was afraid of when posting this. Working with two ...

edited Thanks for the reviews! I was honestly going for a little bit of creepy factor in Lucas. I want people to see him as if he could do anything ...

Thanks guys, I've cut out half the stuff and tried to make it shorter and less predictable. Still working on it and editing things, this is all I have so ...

Thanks for the reviews and comments guys. I've edited this chapter and hopefully it sounds better. I changed her personality but I wanted to keep her realistic, most people aren't ...

*laughs* This is brilliant, nothing else to be said. :D

Thanks guys, I totally get what you mean by the whole show and tell thing. I'll be sure to edit it as soon as I get the chance, meanwhile I ...

Thanks for the reviews! I think I'm going to rewrite the first and second chapter so I've deleted them for now and just left the prologue. ~Pink

Awesome, thanks Stella, I didn't notice the mistakes. I've reviewed and edited this part. :)