Shearwater

Hi guys! Thanks again for all the reviews and comments - I really appreciate that. @Whisperer, thanks for pointing out the missing words. I have a problem with that, seriously. ...

Hey guys, thanks a bunch for the awesome reviews. ^__^ I now know what aspects of this I need to work on or tweak so I'll be doing that. lol ...

Thank you for the reviews. Sorry about little errors, I have a hard time finding my own typos. As for the commas, I generally do that and I guess I ...

Thanks for the reviews guys, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I do agree that the ending was a bit abrupt but I was scared I was making the first ...

Ah, the main character is not the prisoner? Well, that's odd. Well, is your main character the woman then? If so, in my opinion, I would suggest you make it ...

Yay, thank you for the awesome review, Son! I fail at catching my own mistakes. :'( Anyway, I went ahead and edited the nitpicks. Also, Chase and Olivia ended up ...

Okay, I'm back to review chapter two! Well...it's not exactly a review but I can still call this a review just to make myself feel better. ^.^ First of all, ...

@Stephenie and Rent: Gah! Why does everyone hate Jesse? He's not a very bad guy. XD I was actually trying to make you guys like him, but I seem to ...

@WIfe: Thanks for the review! I've changed the little things you've pointed out, thank you. ^^ @Iiscraftywriter: Luke isn't chief Doctor. He's the EMD but EMD's are also doctors and ...

@Whisper: Yeah, time has gone by and Luke has changed. However, he did not give into another girl, he's playing with her. As mentioned, they are friends with special benefits. ...

I love the rain, therefore I like this poem. Good job. -Shear (Sorry for being unhelpful but when I see a poem I like, I have to at least comment ...

Yes, go NaNo!

I don't get it.

Hey Palip! :) Thanks for addressing the few things questions I had with this edit. I'm happy to say this sounds better than the first time ^.^ Also, the beginning ...

Thanks for the reviews guys. I'm totally strangling these last few chapters here. I plan on doing a complete re-write of the first part. So far, I've planned on finishing ...