Shearwater

Hey there Coco, it's me. I think you meant to give me the link to chapter 9 and not 8, unless you made changes but I wasn't sure. I knew ...

Ha! I love this. I feel sort of bad for the dude though, I mean he tried and in the end he was turned down. Well, there are people like ...

Hey Ben! Thanks for the request! :) I have to say, I really like this idea of a 'dictionary' and as always, your humor entertains me. There were a few ...

Hey there! It's Pink :) So I thought this was kind of a long prologue but it was good. You added so much description and it the atmosphere was tense ...

Hi, here to review. :) I held back a desperate cry of aggravation and desperation and closed my eyes. You repeated desperate here, I suggest you take out the second ...

Hi there, thought I'd stop by and do a quickie review :) So here are a few things I found with grammar and all: “Gosh Lezzy, look how nice my ...

Hey there! Sorry, I got here so late. But let's get on with this review, shall we? :D Okay, I'm not exactly going to nitpick because well, that's pretty much ...

Hey Classy, I'm finally here. I have to rewrite this review because my computer messed up and I lost it. :( How sad, oh well. Here we go again! Your ...

Hey Tanya! :D Okay I liked this chapter, full of action as always. I feel bad for all the horrible luck Noah gets himself into. It's so sad... I don't ...

Whoo! That was fun :D I have no nitpicks, most of them already picked so no point. I do wish this a bit longer though. Like more engagement between the ...

Hi BenFranks. I'm here as requested. Don't worry, I found this piece to be quite the little something, so I decided I might as well review a decent piece of ...

Hi! Pink here as requested :D Okay since this is just prologue, I won't be able to provide a decent full-on review but I'll do my best. "You called me?", ...

Hey jayleigh, finally made it! :D -Prologue Awesome job. I like your on the point description here. I mean you don't tell us too much but you tell us just ...

Hi Spitfire! Tanya's sister? That's really cool! I'll be reviewing this piece for you today and hopefully I help ahaha. So let's get started! Immediately I was pounced upon by ...

Wow, that was awesome. I mean the first part was a little draggy but you were getting the story set up and that's not a bad thing. Ugh, I feel ...