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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: X

    Hi! I'm so sorry I got to this so late, but I'm here. So let's see... Okay the first thing I saw when I read the first few paragraphs was ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Harry Potter 3OH!3 song parody

    Oh my, hahahaa! This is really good, I'd pat you on the back if I could. I'm glad you came up with this, I just died of laughing :D Keep ...

    Mar 4, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Let's Burn ITV

    Hey Ben, as always your writing is fun to read! I throughly enjoyed this and I do like British humor as well as American humor and well...humor from all around ...

    Mar 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.10) [newly edited]

    Hi Coco! Alright so I don't have much nitpicks here. But I've got to say the beginning of this chapter was full of excitement and I was ready to see ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: First Story-- part 12 *Please Review*

    Alright, Pink here, as promised. My apologizes for being so late, I've been quite busy lately but I'm here now. So overall it's an interesting story but I have no ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: My guardian dog 4 OLD

    Late as usual, right? Haha, thanks for the PM I'm still reading just so busy lately, I haven't even gotten around to writing my own! lol Anyway, on to your ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: La luna e Bella (Lex & Cassie) chap 1

    Hi Addawen, sorry I'm so late!! I really wanted to review this but I've been so busy with work and all but I'm here! (finally) Okay on with the review! ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Lady Death 5 (Edited!)

    Hey Tanya! C'est moi :D Alright, so first of all, I'd like to tell you that I liked this chapter overall. You had a few things going in here. But ...

    Feb 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Assassin's Redemption- Redrafted

    Hi! Pink here as requested. Sorry I got here late, but I'm here so that counts right? Alright so I read the first version and then read the edited version ...

    Feb 17, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Aberrant Romance - 1

    Hi! Pink here, dropping by to do a quick review. Firs of all, this chapter is kind of short so I don't really know much about the characters and all ...

    Feb 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: My guardian dog 3 (Edited!) OLD

    Whoa, that was cool! I wanna know what happens next, is she really like a princess or something? lol Well, I didn't see anything that I needed to point out ...

    Feb 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Shifters: Chapter 3 part 2

    Hi there, sorry it's taking so long to review your chapters. It's been quite a hectic few weeks for me :) So I have read chapter 5 and it was ...

    Feb 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: My guardian dog (Edited!) OLD

    Oh man I'm here but I'm super late. Sorry! But I'll still review this! Since nit-picks have been harvested I shall just do an overview. Description You do an amazing ...

    Feb 5, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Usual Navidad

    Hi there, here to do a review! So I liked the first paragraph, it was nice and detailed - very well written. But I did find a few things while ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Lady Death 4 (Edited!)

    Hey! Sorry I'm so late! I been quite busy in the last week but I'm back! Okay so with this chapter, I want to say so many good things like ...

    Jan 31, 2010


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien