Shearwater

Alright, back for more! “But that’s what we are made for. We’re different though. A new race, a better race. We are The Guardians,” he proclaimed with pride. His stony ...

Hey Danie, back for another review! The air around him seemed to be crackling I don't understand this one. How can the air be crackling? I burrowed into the familiar ...

Hi Bondgirl, thanks for the request! Shall we get started? I'm not going to nitpick really, since most of the things I wanted to point out have already been addressed.(Yay!) ...

Hi there, it's Pink, dropping by for a short review. Alright, so here's the first thing I'd like to point out. Starting a story off with a quote isn't something ...

Hey Danie, it's me again. I couldn't help myself. I had to do another review :) Alright, so let's get started. Can’t I just forget it all? I asked myself. ...

Hey, Danie, Pink here. Alright, so I liked the description in this piece more than the other chapters. You flow was exceptional and I understood what points you were trying ...

Hey, back for another review! So basically I don't have much to say about this one. I mean, it's all pretty good and there was nothing to nitpick. I'm again ...

Hey, Mad it's me. You said you posted something so I was like, okay let me review it! So, here I am. Ready? I sit here, perfectly still, quietly sitting ...

*gasp* ... Why? I knew it coming though, I knew it was going to be tragedy but ending like this? WHY?! Firstly, it was full of suspense and I didn't ...

Whisper! Alright, I feel sad that your story is coming to an end and I think I might shed a tear or two. :( I have just a few things ...

Pink here! Alright, let's get started :) pushed the annoyed thoughts from my head and I think you should use 'annoying' rather than annoyed. Other than that, there's really nothing ...

Yikes, I just got chills. I not a poet but I know something beautiful when I see it. I loved it! It's just too bad they don't have a 'Love' ...

Hola, Whisper! Back for another chapter. This review is gonna be a short one so yeah... On we go! So...how lucky of you. I only have one real nitpick :) ...

Hey, Pink here! Alright, what to say? Your grammar, punctuation, descriptions and imagery were all great! There technically is...almost nothing to say. I can't rant on your character because she's ...

Hey, Pink here! I slapped my sweaty palm onto my chest. I could feel my heart flitting around like an angry bee. “It was just a dream,” I mumbled, resting ...