Shearwater

Hi Meg, thanks for the request! :) So here's the review! "Did you hear?" "Six more." "Actually came into the light." I think you should put these in separate lines. ...

Hi, it's me again! So, I have to say I hate how Colin is just totally over her now. I mean, I was seriously rooting for the both of them ...

Hey Coral! Awesome poem, I enjoyed reading it immensely. The flow was nice and I like how it came straight from you head, of course I agree with Imagine, these ...

Hiya! pink here :3 Awesome poem Aqua! You hit the spot with this one XD Although, this poem is cute I still find F.R.E.D to be kind of annoying sometimes...does ...

Hi Carlito! C'est moi, Pink :) Back for another review, sorry I'm kind of late -.- Okay, so there were a few problems that I want to address first before ...

Hey ofi! It's moi! :) Thanks for sending me the pm, I will gladly review this piece for you. What I liked Okay, there were a few things that I ...

Hi Megsug, Pink here :) Alright, so I like this style of writing a lot better than I did in the prologue. Mostly because there was actually a set of ...

Hi Carlito! It's me again :) “It was so fun! You should have been there! It was so dark and so scary! At one point this guy was chasing us ...

Hey Carlito! Pink here, as promised! :) So I'm not really going to nitpick on this because it seems you have a good understanding with most of your grammar and ...

Hi! Pink here :) “I’m sorry too.” I said between gasps. Comma after too, not period. Remember if you use 'I said' you need a comma. They need to be ...

Hello Temp. I'm Shear, dropping by for a quick review. Alright so I didn't catch many grammatical errors or punctuation errors so that's a total plus. So my first reaction ...

Hi Retro Disco! Pink here! Just a few nitpicks... to see if their was anyone guarding the door. *there was . One guy, small and stout. Fragment. "There was one ...

Hello MadHatter! Pink here, dropping by for a review. I do have a few nitpicks that I'd like to point out, so bare with me >,< The big clock tower ...

Hi! Pink here, dropping by for a quick review. So I do have a few nitpicks that I'd like to point out. "…Pretend what?" I honestly don't see the point ...

Hello CardDragon, Pink here. Dropping by for a short review. Okay, the first paragraph wasn't really getting much attention but when the girl screamed I was like, "Whoa, what's going ...