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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer - Ch. 2 - P. 2

    Hey, Roal! Thanks for requesting me, I'm here! =) Nitpicks/Comments My silent thought is overwhelm by the fascinated crowd as they cheer. This part should be overwhelmed. I know, it's ...

    Nov 19, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Delivery (Yuriiko's Postsecret's Contest)

    Hey, Sprite! Here as a judge for the Postsecret contest. I’m reviewing everyone’s entries so don’t mind me much. Nitpicks/Comments head was propped up on my elbow. Say whut? Head ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)

    Oy, Fingers. Punk here. So, again, late but nonetheless I still managed to make it. However, I don't have much to say again so bear with me if I somehow ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: P.S. I Hate You(Contest entry)

    Shubhi! Here to review and look over your entry. I'm going to skip the nitpicking really since I know your writing and plus, Jai has pretty much plucked the fruit. ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I Love Her

    Hey, Wicked! Here to review your submission for the Postsecert contest. I'm sure you know Yurriko and I will be the judges so I'm actually dropping by to review and ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Box Full Of Dreams

    RAWR, this review means ten penguins are saved on Penguin day, got it? Back to the review... Too bad, I'm so late. Now, everyone has picked the grapes and I'm ...

    Nov 17, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Breathe -2nd Draft-

    Hey Anger! I'm judging the Postsecret contest with Yurriko and I'm here to drop by for a quick review. Don't mind me, I'll just review and leave. xD Nitpicks/Comments ‘Could ...

    Nov 17, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: When you call me Ma'am

    Hi, Lil! Pink here, as a judge of the postsecret contest. I'm just going around reading and reviewing, don't mind me much. =) Nitpicks/Comments I come every week or so, ...

    Nov 16, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Miracles (For Yuriiko's Postsecret Contest)

    Oy Madds, Pink 'ere. I'm a judge for the Postsecret Contest and I'll be reviewing this for you today. Don't be afraid, I'm just here to read and review, get ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: postcard#1 contest entry

    Dun...dun...dun... The judge has come. . . Don't worry, I'm just reviewing this for you. I will take in the overall story and compare with all the others based on ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Light and Shadow - Chapter 5

    Hey, Whisper! I'm here, sorry I'm late. It's just NaNo and other request. Plus, I've been slow at reviewing lately. Anyway, here is your review, as promised! Nitpicks/Comments “I won’t, ...

    Nov 14, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Fatal love

    Hey, Pointe! Here as requested! When you told me you loved me I was so happy. This is too solid to fit into a poetic line. Happy? How so? Deepen ...

    Nov 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter Two- Not Here

    Hey, Perse! Nitpicks/Comments He had moved more swiftly than what seemed possible- I felt a bit self conscious, walking back down the street I had just traversed, especially when he ...

    Nov 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Deleted

    Hey, Meg. I apologize for being late. Here I am. So, there aren't many parts where I would nitpick with this. You do a good job with the description and ...

    Nov 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter One- Not Here

    Hey, Perse! I'll be reviewing this for you today. :) Nitpicks/Comments The night was full of bruises. Fresh blues and purples of street corner shadows, fading greens and yellows in ...

    Nov 12, 2010


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