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Re: The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer - Ch. 2 - P. 2
Hey, Roal! Thanks for requesting me, I'm here! =) Nitpicks/Comments My silent thought is overwhelm by the fascinated crowd as they cheer. This part should be overwhelmed. I know, it's ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: A Delivery (Yuriiko's Postsecret's Contest)
Hey, Sprite! Here as a judge for the Postsecret contest. I’m reviewing everyone’s entries so don’t mind me much. Nitpicks/Comments head was propped up on my elbow. Say whut? Head ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)
Oy, Fingers. Punk here. So, again, late but nonetheless I still managed to make it. However, I don't have much to say again so bear with me if I somehow ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: P.S. I Hate You(Contest entry)
Shubhi! Here to review and look over your entry. I'm going to skip the nitpicking really since I know your writing and plus, Jai has pretty much plucked the fruit. ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: I Love Her
Hey, Wicked! Here to review your submission for the Postsecert contest. I'm sure you know Yurriko and I will be the judges so I'm actually dropping by to review and ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: A Box Full Of Dreams
RAWR, this review means ten penguins are saved on Penguin day, got it? Back to the review... Too bad, I'm so late. Now, everyone has picked the grapes and I'm ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Breathe -2nd Draft-
Hey Anger! I'm judging the Postsecret contest with Yurriko and I'm here to drop by for a quick review. Don't mind me, I'll just review and leave. xD Nitpicks/Comments ‘Could ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: When you call me Ma'am
Hi, Lil! Pink here, as a judge of the postsecret contest. I'm just going around reading and reviewing, don't mind me much. =) Nitpicks/Comments I come every week or so, ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: Miracles (For Yuriiko's Postsecret Contest)
Oy Madds, Pink 'ere. I'm a judge for the Postsecret Contest and I'll be reviewing this for you today. Don't be afraid, I'm just here to read and review, get ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: postcard#1 contest entry
Dun...dun...dun... The judge has come. . . Don't worry, I'm just reviewing this for you. I will take in the overall story and compare with all the others based on ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Light and Shadow - Chapter 5
Hey, Whisper! I'm here, sorry I'm late. It's just NaNo and other request. Plus, I've been slow at reviewing lately. Anyway, here is your review, as promised! Nitpicks/Comments “I won’t, ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Fatal love
Hey, Pointe! Here as requested! When you told me you loved me I was so happy. This is too solid to fit into a poetic line. Happy? How so? Deepen ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Chapter Two- Not Here
Hey, Perse! Nitpicks/Comments He had moved more swiftly than what seemed possible- I felt a bit self conscious, walking back down the street I had just traversed, especially when he ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hey, Meg. I apologize for being late. Here I am. So, there aren't many parts where I would nitpick with this. You do a good job with the description and ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One- Not Here
Hey, Perse! I'll be reviewing this for you today. :) Nitpicks/Comments The night was full of bruises. Fresh blues and purples of street corner shadows, fading greens and yellows in ...
Nov 12, 2010
