Shearwater

Hey there! I'm sorry for getting to this so late but I'm here now. My review isn't going to be very long or as detailed as I would like it ...

Hiya Laavi! I'm here to review. I'm sorry I've taken a while to get to this but I'm here nonetheless. Now, I'm not really going to go into depth with ...

Hey there. Alright, so I congratulate you for getting this far and still having a pretty decent plot going. However, there are still ares in which you can improve on. ...

Hey there! I'm back for another review. :3 So I had just a few areas that I want to discuss further with the writing part. As the sun rises on ...

Oy, Alpha! I are here for to do this review for you. I'm sorry that it's taken me a bit of time to get to this and I also apologize ...

Hiya! I'm back to review this first chapter. You seem to already have a few nice, decent reviews for this so I won't really go into this as much so ...

Hi, Aero. Pink here, as requested. I see that you've just joined the site not too long ago. :) Welcome to YWS, I hope you have fun here. ^^ I ...

Hi there! Pink here, as requested. First of all, I barely skimmed the previous reviews so I apologize if anything I said is partly repeated or something. ^.^ but my ...

Hi there, Mae. I'm Pink and I actually had a review done for this but my laptop decided to update and restart which meant I lost my review. I was ...

H'okay, Azzi! I'm here to review. :3 Okay, so there aren't many things that I'd like to point out but this version sounds a lot less wordy and easier to ...

Hey, Pointe. I'll try my best to keep up with your novel but if I lose concentration or lose my track, don't be mad at me. >.< If you really ...

Hey, Whisperer! I'm sorry for forgetting about reviewing this. It just got lost in my inbox and that thing moves fast. >.> Anyway, I'm here now. “I don’t see any ...

Alright, Freak. I'm here. :3 So my review isn't exactly going to be a long one in this case, just a short overview of what I thought while reading this. ...

Hey, Shubs! (Still calling you that.) So, I noticed that you wanted an overall review of this and I'm glad because I don't exactly feel like nitpicking either. Lately, I ...

Hi Jesi, here to review! I don't have many nitpicks that I want to go over so you're saved there. Actually, I didn't notice anything that needed to be quoted. ...