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Re: You Don't Love Me
Hey there! I'm Pink and I'll be reviewing this for you today. ^__^ First of all, I think you should lengthen this a bit because it feels kind of short ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 1 (OUTDATED)
Hey there, I'm here to review as requested! ^___^ So, I don't think I'll be doing much nitpicking but I will give you and overall of my thoughts on this ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Through the Glass
Hi there! I'm Pink and I'll be reviewing this short piece for you. ^^ First of all, this is really short! D: I would have liked it more if you ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Eva's Imagination
Hi there, Maddy! I'm Pink and I'll be doing a review for you today. Since this is a contest entry and I want you to do your best, I'm not ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Red: Chapters 1 and a largely finished 2
Hi there, I'm here to review your piece as requested. The first thing I noticed as I was looking this over was the length of which you had written this. ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: CHAPTER ONE ~ Prologue
Hi there, JoJo! So here to review! This is quite a short prologue so I don't think my review will be of much help. Also, you've gotten some pretty good, ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter One)
Hey, Freak! I'm here to review. So, I don't know how much I can possibly say about this. I mean, improvement is improvement, no? I feel like this beginning of ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Turning the Tables(1.3)
Hey shrubs! So I'm here to review this part for you! ^__^ Sorry for being a tad late but I'm here, right? I'm becoming slightly lazy when it comes to ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Confessions of A COA (edited)
Hey there, Over! I'm here to review, as requested. Now, it seems like you have many good reviews here so I'm not sure how helpful I can be but I'll ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Turning the Tables(1.1)
Hey Shubs! I'm here to do a review for you. ^___^ So first, I'm going to start off with the introduction. I'm not going to go much into the nitpicks ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: The Firebird
Hey, Jenth! I'm here to review! ^_^ So, I actually have just a few nitpicks that I found that perhaps you might want to look at. They're not much or ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Part I: The Beginning--and The End.
Hi Buscador!!
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: The Painted Martyr - Excerpt
Hey Gheala! I'm here to do a review for you! ^___^ So yeah, again I probably wont' have much to say but I'll do my best to give you some ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: The Borneo Bushmen Pt. 1
Hey there pen, Pink here. I'll be doing a short review for this for you. ^^ Firstly, I think - as mentioned - that your introduction to your character was ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: The Fisherman
Hey, Azila! I'm here to review this piece for you. I felt like I should since you did review mine and I would feel kinda icky if I at least ...
Feb 16, 2011