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Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the family scenes :) I am really close with my family, so I guess it just comes along with my writing! Thanks! ...

Hi Snowmonkey9! Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate the compliments so much, and I am glad that you enjoyed it. The second part is up as well ...

Oh my gosh, I completely forgot to add so much detail to this %uD83D%uDE48 Their parents do NOT know about the parties! Tbh I might have forgotten all about them ...

Thanks so much for the review! I totally understand each of your suggestions! Overall, Braylie focuses on trying to let Kenny make her own friends, because she doesn%u2019t want her ...

H! Thanks again for another great review! I will totally start using separators as well to make it more clear :) Quotatio-wise, do you mean saying %u201CRosie,%u201D... instead of the ...

Hi Bloodlord, Thank you so so much for this review! I%u2019m glad you are liking it. I totally understand each of your suggestions. The last one is completely a mistake! ...

Hi! Thank you SO much for your helpful suggestions. I%u2019m glad you are interested :) I will most definitely put in a physical appearance! (Honestly can%u2019t believe I didn%u2019t before ...

Hi Pan! Thanks for the review. My story is hurried, so I hope to fix that within my editing! I will take all of your comments and suggestions into consideration! ...

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Oh how sweet! I love seeing these supportive reviews! I%u2019m glad you like it, and I hope you continuing reading!! If you want, I can send you an update when ...

Hi Carlito!! Thanks for the review. I am very sorry to tell you that this is not about Joan of Arc. It's about my ancestor Queen Joan of Scotland. But ...

Hi MJ! Okay so without revealing too much of my main plot, there is a reason for her not being injured *cough cough* without it being supernatural. It takes on ...

Hello Pan! Thanks for the review :) All of your critiques were really helpful, and I will go over everything when I am set to edit. Everything you said makes ...

Hi Lavvie! Thanks for the review! Your advice is really helpful. I only have one comment to make :) I wanted Everlie to seem kind of young for her age, ...

No problem! I am currently working on it, so I will most likely post tomorrow! Thanks for being supportive :) Shea