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Re: In Love With The Enemy.Chapter 1.
Thanks for advice ziggyfred I will keep this in mind+
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: In Love With The Enemy.Chapter 1.
If I'm correct in guessing what this is based on, then it's good. It is based on The twilight saga I think. As far as vampire stories go, this could ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Little Girl
Hm,there are,as people say,errors but I love it is good and the point god aswell.I love how you discribe the girl.Good job!
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: Absinthian Dreams (part two of two)
This is more like a is too long for a poem in my opinion.But the context is good.I don't get the point though...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: Unrequited Love OR Seductress (Can't decide)
I don't have anything I don't like in this poem honestly!
Jul 22, 2010