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Re: Chapter Three - Together We Make The Elements
Wow! This is great. There were a few little grammar mistakes, but overall this was wonderful. The way you describe their fluent, powerful, and quick movements made me imagine ninja ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: The Noose
Very good poem, I like that its a free verse. Although your stanzas aren't well structured (as in the two-line to four-line random pattern), the flow sounded ok. Wonderful original ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Adventures with My Time-Traveling Uncle - Chapter One
This is Awesome! Oh my gosh you need to post the next chapter pronto ASAP rapido! No pressure or anything but NOW! Jk but seriously I enjoyed the whole thing. ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Wages: Chapter One
This would have been even more amazing with out the cuss words. They seemed to make the dragons sound too human like. Sorry. I just would have preferred if there ...
Jan 20, 2014 -
Re: The Fourth World: Ch4 Part 1
This is great! I've already read all the parts you've posted on this story, but wanted to come back to this one again. Wow! It's making me so frustrated that ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Fallen shadows - [chapter one]
Hey there. Right from the start you pulled me in. The very first lines just caught me, they made me curious and excited. With all the descriptions of clans and ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Fatewriter - Prologue
Hi there! I really like this story and I think you should continue with it. To me though it seemed like it was all moving very fast. Maybe add a ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: The Sanatores: Prolouge
Hi there! I love the story so far, and I hope you publish more chapters soon. Only thing that really caught my eye was "she had been in this town ...
Jan 8, 2014