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Re: Ashnirai
Thanks for the review!
Tue Aug 11, 2015 5:50 am -
Re: Anomaly of Nature - Me
omg @Dutiful
Sat Aug 01, 2015 8:28 am -
Re: Whirlpool Love
Hi Pretz: It feels so nice to get reviews, especially for long forgotten works. I wrote this, if I remember correctly, based on a song prompt; the song being, %u201CPiano ...
Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:55 am -
Re: Girls Tell Me Things
China is love, China is life.
Fri May 29, 2015 5:16 am -
Re: Edward Cullen is UGLY!
I'm just happy to be here.
Fri Feb 20, 2015 12:56 pm -
Re: Immortal Devotion
My main issue with the story was how it ended. I felt it was predictable; it made it harder for me to appreciate the eerie middle of your story. And ...
Fri Feb 06, 2015 6:02 am -
Re: The Whale Tells the New Girl to Bring Out a Job Circular
white
Thu Feb 05, 2015 6:51 pm -
Re: The Whale Tells the New Girl to Bring Out a Job Circular
wut
Thu Feb 05, 2015 6:36 pm -
Re: The Whale Tells the New Girl to Bring Out a Job Circular
what
Thu Feb 05, 2015 6:30 pm -
Re: The Whale Tells the New Girl to Bring Out a Job Circular
what
Thu Feb 05, 2015 6:30 pm -
Re: The Whale Tells the New Girl to Bring Out a Job Circular
Hey Africa! Thank you so much for reviewing. I appreciate it a lot. I understand what you mean by the sentences that read awkwardly. The second one is just one ...
Thu Feb 05, 2015 5:17 pm -
Re: These Things Happen
The story was partly inspired by the Star Trek episode "Assignment Earth", where the Enterprise crew, back in time for research, intercepts a human teleporting down on Earth. The human ...
Fri Jan 16, 2015 9:21 am -
Re: These Things Happen
Glad you thought it was funny, man. I seriously didn't plan on this being random and "confusing". Need to work on that.
Tue Jan 13, 2015 10:41 am -
Re: These Things Happen
Hi Lava, Thanks for reviewing. Everyone's like 'this is confusing', and it's kinda confusing me, ha ha. Well, the story I had going on was that there's this agency who ...
Tue Jan 13, 2015 10:01 am -
Re: These Things Happen
Thank you so much for reviewing, lad! Glad you thought it was funny.
Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:32 pm