ShakespeareWallah

thanks a lot. it was very helpful!

sorry for the typos, i guess i typed this in a rush and didn't get to notice.

the "she" here is the girlfriend. and thanks a lot for taking your time with it. I've just posted another story, maybe you'll like that better.

thanks for taking your time reading it. I'm having plans though, for a sequel I think.

good rhyming.........though i had one inkling. how could people forget the name of Jane when she did such a profane thing.

appreciate the words..............and in the end he literally transformed.

this was deppressing.......

Thanks everyone...i appreciated your views.

i liked this piece.......i thought it was really good. i want a sequel..

whats the three words that comes into mind after reading it............I LIKE IT.........really good work..

Awesomely written........tells a lot of things in a few words

thanks for the review everyone.........

the idea of it is amazing....but as previously said it's a bit choppy in places....stop telling people whats happening and start showing them. that would do it.

I liked it a lot. this poem reminds us of what we all go through in life in a particular phase. i loved the way you made this poem rhyme. ...

Unlike others it Rhymes....and the meaning of the poem is really awesome..i liked it a lot