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Re: The Alien Wife
(I'm also a she so... heh XD) i knew that lol. you were nunya/keepwriting, ryt? Anyway, really thanks for reading and laughing lol. I appreciate it a lot.
Tue Jun 27, 2017 7:41 pm -
Re: The Alien Wife
Hey! Thanks for reading and all lol. Really appreciate it. Thank you a lot man for pointing out some of my typos. It really would be "where" and not "Were", ...
Tue Jun 27, 2017 7:24 pm -
Re: The Republic of Thieves
lol it did.
Wed Jul 06, 2016 1:25 pm -
Re: The Republic of Thieves
Thankyou!
Wed Jul 06, 2016 6:39 am -
Re: The Republic of Thieves
Yo. your re-write wouldn't make sense. I'm writing a memoir here. I can't just make up stuff. There was no light pouring in, i never knew if "terror" was written ...
Sun Jul 03, 2016 2:19 pm -
Re: Shame
hey Hannah! seeing you here in yws after a long time. Thanks for the review! about the "jerking off" line, i think you're right. The whole "onto the railing of ...
Mon Jun 27, 2016 1:52 pm -
Re: Shame
i know you were trying to help me. I know that. I appreciate that. Again i responded to your points and explained my reasons for doing certain things certain ways ...
Fri Jun 03, 2016 3:25 pm -
Re: Shame
and frankly i'm a little pissed off at how you feel like you're entitled to some form of appreciation from me just because you reviewed my work. I did thank ...
Fri Jun 03, 2016 3:04 pm -
Re: Shame
I'm not sure you do, though. You did misread parts of the work, and when i said how i didn't think you read those parts carefully, you went all "please ...
Fri Jun 03, 2016 3:00 pm -
Re: Shame
I do want other people's points of views, it's why i post stuff on here. But i also want to reply to their reviews as well. Are you annoyed because ...
Fri Jun 03, 2016 2:24 pm -
Re: Shame
yo. // I'm just gonna cut "(secret)" out of the sentence. sounds better that way. // nope. if i cut the sentence after "everything" then the following part stands on ...
Fri Jun 03, 2016 2:01 pm -
Re: A Day in the Life of an Insecure Relationship
...i wonder what an original review by anus would read like, tho
Fri May 20, 2016 10:24 am -
Re: How to Successfully Elope in Hopes the Family Will Later Take You Back
thanks for the review!
Fri Apr 22, 2016 2:21 pm -
Re: Abused
abuse me pls
Mon Apr 04, 2016 5:32 pm -
Re: How to Successfully Elope in Hopes the Family Will Later Take You Back
in bangla, you usually say the name first and then the uncle/aunt, while in english it's usually the opposite, like Uncle robert, etc. Im using the english way. but Uncle ...
Fri Mar 18, 2016 7:23 pm
