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Re: That Sacred Slut
I like the use of imagery of the darkness the use of metaphors made the reader more interested as we can visualize the atmosphere! I think the first part of ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: To My Friend
I like this poem. I think its good that you tried to using rhyming techniques the topic seems really good! I think overall the poems 4 stars!!
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: When the Time comes (revised)
Im liking this poem! :P
Mar 20, 2011
