Shady

I mean what do you want to see in a flashback or a dream? I already have the dream in italics in this chapter. What else would you like to ...

Hey ink! Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate it! The intelligence comment was a while ago... I want to say in like chapter three? It was during ...

Thank you so much for the review!! You brought up so many good points, and I'll definitely through the things you brought up... I'll also answer some of the questions ...

I'm glad you found it helpful and not discouraging :) I do think that focusing on improving your grammar/spelling, as you mentioned, would also be helpful. I try to steer ...

Okay, I was tired when I reviewed last night... the bit with him talking to Chip does work for foreshadowing. Dunno what I was thinking last night but I re-read ...

That could work... thanks for the suggestion! Wasn't sure how it'd work with her passed out anyway, so that's a good compromise ;)

Bisc! That was SO fast! I'm really impressed :D Thanks for the review

Thanks for the reviews! I appreciate it! :D The good guys are attacking. I guess I could make that a bit clearer, so thanks for pointing it out to me. ...

Thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it! Hmm... yeah the bit about the repetition makes sense. Do you think it would be better if I had a Ranger ...

Thank you for the review!

Ooh that might work. Thanks ^^

Thanks for the review! I appreciate it :) I agree the War Council meeting was a bad way to describe it. I realized in chapter three how little that wording ...

Thanks for the review! I appreciate it and I will definitely tag you when/if I decide to write and post it! To answer your question, the major plot points of ...