Shady

Hey Ary! Shady here with your review. I haven’t read any previous chapters, so please forgive any complaints that are made through ignorance. I also didn’t read the review you ...

Hey Ethwe! Shady here with your review. All the students were in high school except a single little boy. ~~~ Alright! I read your comment about formatting issues, so I’m ...

Hey Adpe! Gosh, this is a really touching poem you wrote. Your rhythm and pace were wonderful, and your content was...sad. I like how you related a bird to your ...

Hey Nidz! Shady here with your review. Okay, this looks interesting. I don’t read much modern, un-traditional grammar things, so please forgive any ignorance in this review... My mind is ...

Hey Aiya! Shady here with a review for you this fine afternoon. I tend to write down thoughts/comments as they come to mind, and try to follow up with a ...

Hey Krieg! Shady here with your review this fine morning. Since this is an essay, I’m assuming it’s pretty important, so I warn you now: I am going to pick ...

Hey Dakota! Shady here with a review for you this fine afternoon. This is a very nice piece you've got here. Your description is wonderful, and description is the part ...

Hey Zed! Shady here with a review for you this fine afternoon. Since you said this is to be entered into a competition, I figured my skills might be useful ...

Hey Bock! I’m baaack, but nearly done spamming your notifications. (You know you still love me ;) ) “Feel free to tear to pieces”... Aye-aye. Brace yourself. >: D Indeed ...

Hey Bock! Shady back with review number four. :D Ahahahaha...poetry...right, I’ll give it a shot. So...your poem starts feeling a bit forced. It smoothes out in the middle, and is ...

Hey Bock! Shady coming at you with review number three. Right, so I tend to advise starting a chapter with dialogue, especially your first chapter. The second chapter of Sunburned ...

Hey Bock! Shady back with review number two. He consented, if only because her agonized whining was giving him a headache. ~ “Agonized” sounds sympathetic, while the rest is just ...

Hey Bock! Shady here with your review, as requested. ;) So, it might be because I’m just like you, and therefore dripping with cynicism myself, but the first bit made ...

Hey Stori! Shady here with your review, as requested. :) is your protagonist going through some illicit abuse? That’s what it seems like, but it’s hard to tell. You don’t ...

Hey Egs! Shady here with your review, as requested. ;) And the conversation revolved around this for the entire trip. ~ Nix the ‘And’, it’s unnecessary, and capitalize the ‘the’. ...