Shadowstalker

Now now, I didn't scold and belittle -your- poem Cornelius, I complimented it as having a good -idea-, just the way it was written was a bit off. And judging ...

Edited. And the double -- thingies is sort of like a hitch in the sentence, more than a ; but not a : its...where it changes subject slightly, but not ...

Thanks. I'll try to rewrite the introduction and all... could you give me an example perhaps of why, and where, it needs editing? Ta SS

Thanks for the review heh. The first attempt at this subject i made, I got shot down for giving the kid a history and a description and all that. Now ...

Very good, I agree. But...try not to get your tenses mixed up. Other than that, it was great. Who are the 'immortals that don't understand' by the way? That just ...

Point one, I'm aussie, you're yank. Which means 'neighbourhood' is spelt correctly, for me. Point two, I wrote it at 11pm, after being up since 6 the previous morning. Thinking ...

I ....like it. I think. I'm not entirely sure as it's...unique. I do like the wording, I can hear the water plop and ripple and all that, it's rather good. ...

Soo....uh, where do I put it then?