Shadowlight

Hi I'm shadowlight! I really liked this piece! Unlike everyone else it seems I didn't see a transition form first to third. I just felt your main character was describing ...

Hi I'm Shadow, I have to agree with the other reviewers, you have taken an old tired cliched storyline of vampires and werewolves and made it new and fresh! I ...

Hi I'm shadow and I had the pleasure of reading this piece. I think it's almost impossible to critique a piece like this that is written form the heart. this ...

Hi I'm Shadowlight and I had the pleasure of reading your piece. I have dyslexia so I'm not going to point out any spelling or punctuation errors. (personally I don't ...

Hi I'm Shadowlight and I had the pleasure of reading your piece. First of all I must say this read like a real book. the way you weave your dialogue ...

Hi My name is shadow and I had the pleasure of reading your piece! I must say right off the bat you have a lovely interchange between all your characters. ...

Hi I'm shadow and I had the pleasure of reading your story. I'm a dyslexic so I'm not going to get into any critiques about spelling or punctuation (I only ...

hi I'm Shadowlight and I had the pleasure of reading your story, and all i can say is... HOLY FREAKING CRAP!!!!!! that was SO good, and I don't even like ...

Hi I'm shadow and I had the pleasure of reading your poem. I'm not really one for reviewing poetry. (I have dyslexia so I can literally NOT hear rhyme) But ...

Hi I'm Shadow and I had the pleasure of reading this snippet of your story! First of all I liked the sense of danger you gave your story, I could ...

Alrighty! You have quite a list to write from! I have maybe 15-20ish stories floating around in my noggin myself but I never thought of just writing down a brief ...

Hi SHadowlight here and I had the pleasure of reading your piece! Now I like the interchange between characters it seemed natural, and i really like two experienced soldiers compared ...

Hi I'm Shadow, and I had the pleasure of reading your story. I liked how you dived right in to the action, not flopping around like a dead fish trying ...

Hi I"m Shadowlight, and I had the pleasure of reading your poem. I don't usually review poetry but I love to read it. (I can't write it to save my ...

Hello I'm Shadow and I had the pleasure of reading your story! I'm not one for picking out grammar or spelling fluffs (I'm horrid at it) so I will just ...