Shadowlight

Oh my what a chilling piece! I really have to say although I can't write poetry I love seeing what other people come up with and this is brilliant. At ...

I have to say I really liked this little snipped you wrote- just one problem I see in it actually it was far too short! Okay but seriously, I really ...

Hello! My name is Shadowlight and I had the pleasure of reviewing your prologue! Okay let me start by saying I really like how your style has a flare of ...

Hello CreativelyWritten! Shadowlight here to give you my two cents on this piece (don't worry I don't bite) I normally don't review poetry because I don't write it- and that ...

Sunshine, I actually disagree with the previous reviewer on what they said about this little piece. The shortness of it makes it hard to actually be in any position to ...

Hi Grape, You're in luck I was able to read this BEFORE work. Alright, several of my comments have already been covered by others so I will not go into ...

Hey Walter, (my grandfathers name was Walter so it is an amazing name.) :) I totally can tell you're upset about this whole critique part of YWS and if this ...

Hey Isha! Well for starters I have to say that this is probably the most unique thing I've ever personally read on this site. Don't you just love those random ...

Yo Sachi my dearest love! I am here to review your lovely piece, I am going to be nick picky just to forewarn you!

I am SO sorry it took me so long to review this! As I already told you a while back I don't review on the mechanics of writing like the ...

567ajt, I found this while wandering about the site, I read it and my heart goes out to you. You are too young to have to deal with what your ...

Hi Vuzzy! I LOVED this, everything about it! I can't rhyme myself to save my life, because of my dyslexia, so I am always blown away by those who can. ...

Wow..... just wow. It was certainly disturbing and heart wrenching. Alright, I like how you really seemed to get into the head of an abused woman, her waffling between her ...

I can't believe I forgot to review this! (kicks self) I laughed and I cried. This piece was heartrendingly beautiful and sad. I love how you wrote it from a ...

Hi I'm Shadowlight! This read like a fable in so many ways or a childrens story. it was so lovely! There are a few places where you use more modern ...