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I have to agree with xJupiter about the structure but it is a good example of poetry. Lots of readers could easily relate which makes it appealing to many types ...

It was amazing. It was a bit slow at first when you read the description because it makes you think for a moment about the "Shimmering, silver dust" to realize ...

Hello I really liked your short story, the description in the beginning was spot on but it feels like it was fading out too fast. The way you wrote your ...